Use of Mood Writing in the Charles Dickens novel, A Christmas Carol.
Mood Word Clusters
The clustering of mood words changes how we feel about a scene. Words that feel light, bright and happy create merry scenes of blithe ease. Conversely, words that feel dark, cold and miserable create scenes with senses of dread, fear or mournful grief. Given the bleak times Dickens wrote of, we’ll see more of the latter than the former. As you read these quotes, notice the words in bold and their scattering within the prose.
Positive clustering of mood words:
[Stave five: The End of It]
“Bell, dong, ding; hammer, clang, clash! Oh, glorious, glorious!
Running to the window, he opened it, and put out his head. No fog, no mist; clear, bright, jovial, stirring, cold; cold, piping for the blood to dance to; Golden sunlight; Heavenly sky; sweet fresh air; merry bells. Oh, glorious! Glorious!”
Negative clustering of mood words:
[Stave one, Marley’s Ghost]
“Oh! But he was a tight-fisted hand at the grindstone, Scrooge! a squeezing, wrenching, grasping, scraping, clutching, covetous, old sinner! Hard and sharp as flint, from which no steel had ever struck out generous fire; secret, and self-contained, and solitary as an oyster. The cold within him froze his old features, nipped his pointed nose, shrivelled his cheek, stiffened his gait; made his eyes red, his thin lips blue; and spoke out shrewdly in his grating voice. A frosty rime was on his head, and on his eyebrows, and his wiry chin. He carried his own low temperature always about with him; he iced his office in the dog-days…”
Summary
Dickens placed mood words in a way that enabled them to be absorbed into the scene. They become a necessary part of the description rather than a list of adjectives. As with many of his contemporaries, he was fond of long sentences with plenty of commas and connective words. In this style he could ‘house’ far more evocative mood words!
Learning Activities
1. Think of two scenes with opposite moods. Perhaps one can be a stormy day, cold and dark; the other can be a spring day in a meadow or a special occasion. Using the examples from Dickens as inspiration, write your own versions.
2. Go to The Mood Book for inspiration and write your own creative paragraphs.
Use of Mood Writing in the Charles Dickens Novel A Christmas Carol
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